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Rapunzel
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6 responses to “Rapunzel”
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Hi Rachel! Wow I love your presentation! I love that you were making food while presenting so you kept it interesting . It’s also cool how you didn’t read anything and spoke from what you know!
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I agree, I loved the casual presentation, and the drink is a plus.
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Hey Rachel, the way you engaged the audience was very creative and natural. It really felt as if you were telling the story from your own life and especially being that you were not reading from a script. This version of Rapunzel is different from what I know as “ Tangled” or the line “ Rapunzel , Rapunzel let down your hair”. I like that her voice was what drawn him and they found one another. The beginning of the story with the parents is very realistic and relatable with the pregnancy cravings and woman needing that item and the men are forced to seek and provide the item or all hell will break lose lol.
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Hello Rachel, I thought your presentation was very entertaining. Your tone of voice was really what drew me in, it sounded nonchalant. I like how you stressed words like “and” but also with the word “so,” this made the story more encapsulating. I also enjoyed how you became the character of Rapunzel; the way that you told the story was very realistic. You had a good pace while talking, I kept wanting to know what was going to happen next, and how the story would end. Overall, well done!
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I agree with Synphanie, it does sound like you are telling this story as if it happened to you. You really finished making the strawberry matcha on time with finishing your story too, lol I would not know how to time that properly if I did something similar!
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