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7 responses to “Rapunzle Tangled Truth”

  1. Denise Warren Avatar
    Denise Warren

    Salma that was an excellent version of Rapunzel. You were very creative with this modern, hip, and humorous spin to this fairy tale. The effort you put into creating your version is evident. Nice job Salma!

  2. Aleksandra A Grala Avatar
    Aleksandra A Grala

    Hello Salma. I loved how you gave details on Repunzel on how she is an influencer and loves to braid her hair. And the comment on if they delivered coffee.

  3. Amy Merino Avatar
    Amy Merino

    I love your version of the story where she is an influencer and the modern twist. And the moral of her being lazy and that’s the only reason why she stayed trapped

  4. Kajol Victoria Singh Avatar
    Kajol Victoria Singh

    Salma, you kept me engaged with the story as you told it – it sounds very original and I like how you added your own details to the telling. Nice work!

  5. Sophia Awad Avatar
    Sophia Awad

    Hey Salma! I loved that you made this your own! Your version was definitely more humorous and had a lot of energy. Your jokes and details made it more modern and suitable for our newer generations.

  6. Layla Ettu Avatar
    Layla Ettu

    Salma Great job! I felt like we were on FaceTime and you were telling me tea about a friend of yours. You made the story feel like it was written in this day and age.

  7. Aliviya Iskhakova Avatar
    Aliviya Iskhakova

    This was sooo creative and I like your version of Rapunzle more than the original honestly. You made this so humorous and enjoyable to listen to as you put a modern funny twist on the fairy tale while telling it with a completely straight face which just made it so much more humorous. Amazing work Salma!

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